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Derrick The Dick

Derricks a Dick

The rain slicked the pavement of the hospital parking lot, reflecting the harsh, artificial glow of the streetlamps.

Derrick slammed through the revolving doors with a velocity that suggested he owned the air in the room. He did not slow down for the elderly woman struggling with a walker in the lobby. Instead, he swerved around her, his shoulder clipping her bag and sending a flurry of postcards scattering across the linoleum.

He did not pause. He did not offer a hand. He merely pressed the elevator button with a rhythmic, frantic violence, his teeth bared in a snarl of impatience.

When the doors opened, a nurse attempted to exit with a tray of medication. Derrick stepped forward before she could clear the threshold, forcing her to stumble back into the small metal box. He stared at the floor numbers, his breath coming in ragged, audible gasps that sounded like a predator cornering prey.

He reached the fourth floor and sprinted toward the west wing. A security guard called out for him to slow down, but Derrick ignored the command, rounding a corner so sharply he nearly knocked a water pitcher from a rolling cart. He reached Room 412 and practically kicked the door open.

Inside, a younger man named Dave sat by the window, staring blankly at the dark sky. Derrick did not greet him. He crossed the room in three strides, grabbed Dave by the front of his jacket, and hauled him toward the door.

Dave remained limp, his eyes wide and vacant. Derrick shook him once, his face contorted with what looked like pure, unadulterated rage.

He dragged Dave into the hallway, his fingers digging into the fabric of the coat, ignoring the whispers of the staff and the horrified looks of the visitors.

The shift in perspective occurred as reality settled in behind Dave’s eyes. The world had been silent for hours. Dave had been sitting in that chair since dawn, watching the digital monitor next to the bed flatline.

He had watched the nurses cover the body of his mother. He had watched the room go cold. He was trapped in a thick, gray fog where time had ceased to function. He had heard the phone in his pocket buzzing for forty minutes, a rhythmic vibration he could not process.

When the door crashed open, the fog didn't lift, but a hand reached through it. He felt the grip on his jacket, but it didn't feel like an assault. It felt like a tether.

As Derrick pulled him into the hallway, Dave finally heard the sound that had been muffled by his own grief. It was Derrick’s voice, but it wasn't angry. It was breaking.

Derrick wasn't shouting in a rage. He was sobbing between words, begging Dave to move because the transplant coordinator was on the phone, and the heart their mother had donated only had a window of minutes left to reach the correct authority… this was her final wish, a final farewell with a gift to the world.

Derrick’s frantic movements in the lobby hadn't been entitlement. He had been running from the administrative office where he had spent three hours fighting a legal injunction to honor her final wish. 

He had clipped the elderly woman because his vision was blurred by tears he refused to let fall until his brother was safe. He had pushed into the elevator because every second he waited was a second his mother’s final gift drifted closer to becoming non viable.

As they reached the exit, Derrick shoved Dave into the passenger seat of a waiting car. He didn't slam the door to be loud. He slammed it to ensure the seal was tight against the storm. As Derrick got behind the wheel, his knuckles white against the leather, he reached over and squeezed Dave’s hand. The aggression was gone, replaced by the crushing weight of a man who had carried the entire world on his shoulders for one hour just so his brother wouldn't have to carry anything at all.

They made it with but a minute to spare on the deadline to sign.

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